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PostSubject: The Mirage   Mon Mar 28, 2011 9:53 am

This is a story I made for school competition. Enjoy! Smile

"The Story":
 

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There is no place like 127.0.0.1


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PostSubject: Re: The Mirage   Tue Mar 29, 2011 11:50 am

omg,its way big
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PostSubject: Re: The Mirage   Thu Mar 31, 2011 11:25 am

Google wrote:
omg,its way big
Come on Google!. What unconsiderate from your part Mad . It takes more time to write than to read, imagine all the time elite spent writing this, not to mention sharing his toughts. Everyone deserves a bit of respect. If you don't want to read it don't do it, no one is forcing you, that kind of comments are useless and you know it well.

On the other hand, I will only say this story was a very interesting one as Freud and Frankl would say.
Also it helped me a bit more about my english learning.

PD: I'm not mad. It's just that I consider those kind of comments 'out of place' hence my reply.
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PostSubject: Re: The Mirage   Thu Mar 31, 2011 11:58 pm

Praetor wrote:
Google wrote:
omg,its way big
Come on Google!. What unconsiderate from your part Mad . It takes more time to write than to read, imagine all the time elite spent writing this, not to mention sharing his toughts. Everyone deserves a bit of respect. If you don't want to read it don't do it, no one is forcing you, that kind of comments are useless and you know it well.

On the other hand, I will only say this story was a very interesting one as Freud and Frankl would say.
Also it helped me a bit more about my english learning.

PD: I'm not mad. It's just that I consider those kind of comments 'out of place' hence my reply.

I commented on academic front, and this is a big story especially for school competition.There are 5140 words used which is too much ( I don't know whether the competition allows to write this much big...).A story should never exceed 750 words or max 900 words unless they say pen down a book.
There's no doubt the effort involved deserves recognition and honour.

PD: I'm not mad. It's just that I consider those kind of judgement 'out of place' hence my reply.


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PostSubject: Re: The Mirage   Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:21 am

They said that it has to be 5 pages minimum and 10 pages maximum. 12 pages if it is really interesting. Very Happy

I know Google and he wouldn't place that comment to dishonor me.

Wish me luck, guys. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: The Mirage   Fri Apr 01, 2011 2:58 pm

Google wrote:

I commented on academic front, and this is a big story especially for school competition.There are 5140 words used which is too much ( I don't know whether the competition allows to write this much big...).A story should never exceed 750 words or max 900 words unless they say pen down a book.
There's no doubt the effort involved deserves recognition and honour.

PD: I'm not mad. It's just that I consider those kind of judgement 'out of place' hence my reply.

Perhaps You should have written that before, not later.

Conclusion: Is always good to clarify completely and idea before posting to avoid misunderstandings. People may get the wrong idea if you don't do it.

Good luck elite!



PD: I'm mad now. Beware! Maria Heck. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: The Mirage   Sun Apr 03, 2011 10:10 am

Moral: You must clarify before bursting out or you must stage your own comments.Few people hate typing.

Good luck elite cheers


PD: I am still not mad Wink
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PostSubject: Re: The Mirage   Sun Apr 03, 2011 10:44 am

Very nice story mate (;
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PostSubject: Re: The Mirage   Sun Apr 03, 2011 12:38 pm

Google wrote:
Moral: You must clarify before bursting out or you must stage your own comments.Few people hate typing.

Apply that to yourself nexttime Wink
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PostSubject: Re: The Mirage   Fri Apr 08, 2011 8:03 pm

Nice Story
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PostSubject: Re: The Mirage   Sat Apr 09, 2011 7:27 pm

hmm very interesting, nice history =D GL
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